All Comments on 'End of Summer Drive'

I’m so confused. In the beginning, Marie is described as a blonde with porcelain skin but when he picks her up, she has her fiery red hair tied up. The author needs consistency.

Disregard the previous comment. I confused Marie with Tanya. Great story!

I managed to get about a quarter of the way through page 2 before i could stand it no more!

You desperately need to get someone to PROOF READ and EDIT.

Sorry, could have been 4*, possibly more but with so many grammatical errors, missed out words, etc I really can't justify more than 2-

WTFC? Lots of hot, tight juicy pussy and pert tits. I was not keeping track of hair color.

Definitely a hot story. I, for one, could use more of it.

WTF!?!?!?! Where is the end to the story?!?! Part II please!!!