All Comments on 'Endangered Ch. 05'

Maybe he just forgot his password? It could happen.....

Please, we need more!

Need... more... chapters...

Very enjoyable.

When do we see ch. 6?

So this is a truely excellent story. Sex, adventure and a great story.

It's also an absolute shame as well. 7 months and no chapter 6.... Incomplete stories, especially the great ones, are the bane of my Literotica experience. It's as if I've wasted my afternoon reading the first 5 chapters. I understand that the story is free, however as the author, don't you want to see your masterpiece complete?

If this story is still incomplete and you are reading this comment then don't bother with this story. Only disappointment will follow.

one of the best stories ive ever read. so good ltpc u could be a professional writer.

It's an amazing story. I just wish you'd finish it. Sorry if I seem rude with that, but a story like this NEEDS to be finished. From what I can see, you have a chapter or two more you could possibly write from where you stopped here. Here's hoping you finish this masterpiece

I have to know how this ends it's killing me!!! Please submit more!!!

I'd love to see lesbian mixes within the harem..and of course Chris, being the center of

But as it seems most of us here are quite ok with waiting a while for an update to a story as good as this one. Here's hoping it doesn't go the way of 'Path of the Necromancer' and stay unfinished.

Honestly one of the best stories I've read in a long time! I wish it was an actual book to read. The plot and character development are fantastic, so bravo, certainly one of the harder aspects for authors to nail down IMO.

I can't wait for chapter 6, I have a feeling it's going to be a very eventful addition to this story. Cheers mate and keep writing!

I was rereading this great story and stumbled across a Firefly quote in chapter 4: "if someone tries to kill you, you kill them right back". Was a nice surprise, didn't expect that.

Anyways, this is a great story. Please continue it!

Just wish he would let us know he's still writing it I keep checking in weekly

You updated that chapter 6 is 80% complete. I think you have given it to your editor by now? Hope to see you much soon than sooner.

Soooo glad to hear there's a chapter six in the works.

I love it and would absolutely love to see it turned into a novel or better yet a series of! Looking forward to more and hopefully soon!

Awesome read. Hope we will see more!! Thanks for sharing your talent.

This is a really good read but part 6 probably won't be sent to his editor until 90% or somewhere closer to 100

How do you know it's being done or nearly completed?

This story is my absolute favorite in the sci fi genre. Can't wait until the next chapter(s) are published. Hopefully soon please.

The series is really good, I hope the next part comes out soon.

Will you continue the story?

is all we are left with.

it has been so long.

This story isn't done yet........ Pease finish it

Pleas this is a wonderfully well written story and it deserves to be finished. Please don't do know it or yourself the dishonor of leaving it unfinished.

would etaski know what happened to him?

So the 80% comment is in his bio also its out dated so really all we are waiting on is the editor whom ltpc can't control even if he gets a new one it'll still take time for the new editor to go over the same stuff the last guy has gone over(given how personal lives can get in the way it may not be much) then pick up from there, so just have some patients...... even if it has been nearly a year since the last posting

Are jus making up stuff or is new chapter in the works it been almost a year

I was reading this chapter for the umpteenth time and found out there is an anagram in the architect's surname.

Stephen Sibon. Sibon <=> Bison. I guess it fits, as he's a werebison

Anybody have an updates on the status of the editing of the next chapter?

what i won't do to have the next chap of this series :/

sigh..

anybody got any idea what he's been upto??

This is an amazing story, and one of my all time favorites. I really hope you are just in sabbatical man, and not leaving this story to be yet another unfinished story among a myriad of others. Please come back, or at least tell is you are well and truly done and not coming back.

who knows maybe he died things like this happen,thatsthe only reason i can think of for him not finishing this story, that or he just doesnt give two fucks about his fans

Why god why, why won't he finish this great story and one know of any updates or changes??

to my knowledge tempest there is no chapter 6 in the making nor are there any updates that i have heard of, ive sent him emails through the Lit contact system and gotten no response at all so as far as i know hes dead or just doesn't give two fucks about continuing a story people have enjoyed so much

He can't write anymore

Well shit that's bad luck to the 666th power*that was intended*

Why does this always happen! I find a briliant story on this site, I get really into it and then it just ends, not finishes but ends with no given reason. I understand that something may have occured that made it impossible for the itpc to post and i do not mind in that minner of speaking, it just so frustrating for something so briliant not to have been finish.

Love this story. Enjoy all the little snippets of pop culture you've added in. Quoting a nerds gallery of TV show's. Your writing and pacing are excellent I sincerely hope you are alive and kicking and just taking a sabbatical from this story. IF, you finish this on another forum or publish please let us know. I would certainly pay to read it.

I talk to him he is not write any more said some one else can take over

On why they're giving up on it?

>see only 5 chapters

>don't bother looking at date completed so I avoid knowing if it was completed or not

>finish reading chapter 5

>read date completed

>17 months ago

>fuck

Welp, another story to add to my bucket list of stories that will never be completed. I found the story really good and it's a shame this'll be it. Honestly, for some reason I didn't really like how the events unfolded, mainly the whole Secret being revealed aspect. It might be because these events now detract from a story that focuses on Chris coming to terms with his species but that's just me. Doesn't really matter now anyway.

ltpc if you're not dead or something I thank you for this story and wish you the very best.

the is nothing i despise most than when i find a gorgeous story,fall really hard for her,then she breaks up with me.

I can it believe you would this here. This could be a. Awesome novel...one that I would purchase..... very disappointed this was the end and how it ended.

So disappointed this has ended! This is without a doubt in my top ten on this site. So much potential, too! So many paths to take from here! Wish LTPC would write some more...

I asked Etaski, LTPC's editor for chapters 4 and 5, and she hasn't heard anything from LTPC either. No drafts, no correspondence. A search on Google reveals only these 5 chapters (I've seen authors switch to different sites. That does not appear to be this case). I wouldn't expect another chapter to be posted, which is unfortunate, because this story has a fantastic premise and I would love to see a continuation of the world-building and plot.

"... and they all lived happily ever after!"

Don't give up my fellow readers the fabled author has to return a story this good can't die so tragically.

It can't just end like this. A story this great must be finished.

he has NovusAnimus in his favorite athor list and hes a new writer like 2016 new so eather hes alive and just doesnt have time to write or just doesnt want all the hatred from an unfinished story orrrrrr some one else is using his acount but makes u think where he is cause its been almost 2 years just hate when i find another... Intrepid_Fate seems like all my favorite stories are going un finished

To all:

I am a continuation writer and my team and I are happy to announce the story will live.

I've contacted the author and if there is no response then I will continue the tale. I hope that you check out my other work before judging us to harshly. We work hard and do our job to the best of our abilities.

Expect something along the lines of a Story Log to appear while we work out some key ideas. Let us know what your thinking and where you spot some of our mistakes in the Story Log

JC

Story Log is complete

the upload will be soon, expect the next chapter to occur in the coming month and a half.

JC

They won't let them put it up become Itpc has been active he need to let us no you let some one finish it that can tired of him ignoring us

They took down the story log for some reason. Probably the same reason as why I've been denied the overall story continuation. LTPC hasn't given me permission, and has been active on the site of late (2016) and thus his copyright is still active to protect his story.

JC

@JC_The_Continuer: even if LTPC died today, his copyright would be "active to protect his work" for the next 70 years (according to U.S. laws, in some countries it's even longer). https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_countries%27_copyright_lengths

I agree. Thus why I am not doing anything unless I am granted permission. The copyright isn't with the individual writer, it is with the site. The site own the rights to Endangered as it stands, thus I need their permission to take over the story.

To get permission I also need to follow a couple standards they've set out. Including the alterations of main characters, introduction of new characters added to that I need to move away from the original plot as quickly as possible. Its why my POTN continuation moved very quickly and a huge amount of plot was pushed into a timespan of only 2 days.

I also wouldn't use Wikipedia as a credible source as each copyright is due and unto itself and each have their own clauses. I give you Robin WIliams, his film's weren't allowed on TV for 1 year after his death while his voice pieces are not allowed for a further 20/25 years after his death, thus why Disney dropped their plans to make another Aladdin.

JC

I thinK he reads ever thing we write on here and Laughs at us he could At least last know something say he's done anything but no he reads are we writing comments and laughs

Please continue this. It's very good

"You are simply granting us a non-exclusive right to publish your story on Literotica.com... ...all rights to the story still belong to you, the author.

" - Literotica FAC

"The copyright isn't with the individual writer, it is with the site." - JC_The_Continuer

JC missed on that one. Maybe it was just poor communication. Either way I would have expected better from someone aspiring to complete unfinished stories.

Even if your life has taken a different turn and you have found enjoyment and satisfaction elsewhere, know that you have engaged at the very least myself sublimely. I re read this and I don't mean for it to sound pretentious. I found this story diverting, such a welcome escape from the sweat of real life. Although incomplete t has been a joy. bm.

Ok I give up. Just another author that will never finish. I'll add it to the pile.

If you can read this and real life made it impossible to continue i understand. But if you quit because of negative trolls on the internet than i have 0 respect for that. If you are a writer and cannot ignore the negative nancies out there then i have no clue why you have posted it in a public place for people like me to find, read, and love, then get left in the lurch. I hope you either complete it or delete it, also to be honest, neither would ameliorate me.

I've created a patreon page where you all can vote on which works you want to see completed.

As it stands Fate of Terra by Intrepid Fate is leading the way by a large margin. If you want to contribute to the voting come on over, its free to do so.

JC

www.patreon.com/jc_the_continuer

..well hopefully... was really surprised when I saw on my lit feed that you updated your profile! At least there's hope of an upcoming update! Anyway welcome back!

HE UPDATED HIS PROFILE. 30,000 WORDS INTO THE NEW STORY. KEEP UP THE HOPE FOLKS!

Chapter 7??? But isn't it chapter 6 that's to be released !!!

Chapter 6 has been content complete almost since I stopped. I'm holding it so I don't pigeon hole myself if I want to make changes.

We wish chapter 6 will be posted soon..but damn man your presence in literotica is more than enough for me now..B-)

Too many authors have written parts of a story and then dropped off of the map. Thank you for coming back and writing more :)

you're a giant of literotica. it's really good to see you back..

Glad to see you back LTPC...such a great story, have been hoping there would be an eventual continuation (so many left unfinished, didn't want this to be another one!) Looking forward to the release of Ch. 6 when you determine the direction for 7+!!!

So when are you submitting ch6 man?????

Great story!! Let's have the next chapter! If you want to make changes to the storyline after, go for it, but don't let the doubt hold back your creativity!

I was so excited to see your post on your profile that you are working on this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This is one of my favorite stories on lit and I constantly come back to re-read it even though it was left unfinished. I hope everything works out in your life and you find the time to finish this story properly. Either way I just wanted to say thank you for the work you put into it. I don't think most of the commenters realize just how much time and effort goes into creating a masterpiece like this.....that they are enjoying for free. So thank you and keep up the good work. Really looking forward to next chapters.

Has anyone heard from again since he posted the other day I'm worried he's just going to disappear on us again I really want to see this story finished

It's still going to be a while until I post Chapter 6, sorry. I'm well into 7 and I expect to want to be about half way through 8 before posting. Thanks for the support everyone.

That's great news can't wait for the next chapter happy to see your still keeping up with it

Any update

If you have written it. post it. u'll probably get busy and stop writing before that day ever comes that ur ready to post. why not post what u have already, get the positive comments to motivate you to keep writing and update previous chapters as necessary.

Chapters 6 and 7 are both done, waiting for edit and posting.

I will release 6 asap. 7 will be held until I'm happy with 8 which I'm just sinking my teeth into now.

Sorry to hear that RL has been sucking for you. FWIW, I don't think it's a dick move to retreat and regroup in the face of pain and suffering, so please, don't go beatin' yourself up for doin' what you needed to do. As I've heard said: Those who matter don't mind; those who mind don't matter.

Be well, knowing you've got TONS of us hoping the best for you (perhaps with a teeny bit of self-interest involved), and waiting on tenterhooks for your next offering.

Looking forward to whatever you are willing to share!

When can we expect the next chapter.

Soon

I am glad to see you active again ltpc..we have waited this long without knowing solidly whether you would come back..now we know that you are well and active in this site ....atleast I will be glad to wait for your story with much more confidence

I'm so happy you're back!

The fact that the humans have not already found them is more disconcerting. I see you as a person enjoying SCP wiki.

You are back ! Excellent story so far, I look forward to more and more. I had read the first 5 chapters then put it in my 'To follow up' section. Just re-read this chapter to get back in the story. I had forgotten the details, Love the Bovine twist. Am looking forward to the Female Dragon meeting, that should throw a kink in his plans too. And I'm suspecting it could be Both of them...

I did have a couple of questions:

First, do dragons have breath weapons in your world? I would think it would have come up by now.

Second, wouldn't a local area dispel be a serious weapon against invisible vamps?

I would think that something along the line of a small-scale magical emp would undo a lot of lesser enchantments, and having that invisibility spell go poof in daylight would be a real bitch for a vamp!

I was wondering if Ether could be used along those lines, to disrupt magical energies in the Norm...

Just thoughts that wouldn't go quiet :)

Loving the story, especially the way the fast pace isn't really changing Chris.

Jason

You are living up to your standards. Thank you.

On a lighter note, it's sad that your president is just so much better than any of the real ones. I try to imagine the gobshites handling such a situation nowadays and my mind shuts down and goes on leave - a nice holiday on a beach somewhere.

When the story started, "Endangered" obviously referred to the status of the Dragon species. This chapter, and Radek still being at-large, raises the possibility that it might also refer to all Beings and Humans.

Radek didn't strike me as the type that would let a peaceful Revelation prevent him from trying to reach his (unspecified) goals.

Fantastic book...cant stop reading....simply aweome

This is a story I've enjoyed and I have high standards. How bout you just write your own story where you can play out your fantasy. Let's how good they'll be 😉

Yes it's not perfect but I've really enjoyed it. Go get a life bro 😂😂

It's just as good the third and fourth and fifth time

This has to be one of the best multi-chapter story arcs I've read on this site!

I just finished binging the series and am eager to see more! Glad to see that you are on Patreon and have signed on as a supporter to keep abreast of the progress toward your next chapter! Keep up the great storytelling!

NOOOOOOOOO! 😭🤧😥😢 It can't be over!

Story gets quite boring. 5 chapters of very little magic. You have a whole world of Beings but few moments to show us the magic and power of any of them. Hell Chris won’t even change forms to go to sleep. To be half through the whole story he hasn’t learned much either. Seems like more filler than actual substance. It’s a good story but the first couple chapters should be condensed. Then the rest really fill in the magic world.

I hope Annabel dies

They are talentless and could not possibly do better.

Fuck them, I'll happily refund them their money

and you continue to your strong writing.

Now I want to be a dragon. 😁

Absolutely love this work. It's got shadowrun style to the revelation. Its got dragons.

Not just any dragons.

But sentient shape shifting dragons.

Hope your well and writing as much as you can.

I came to lit for erotic writings and found some of the best works I've ever read.

Thank you for such a gem to the fantasy genre