All Comments on 'Ending on a High'

Technically not incest, but I guess it is taboo.

Whatever, it’s well written and hot. Thanks, five stars.

Tc

Ignore the comment that it was all written:; it was not.

You need to put a great deal of effort into learning punctuation. You probably think you do it right since you do a lot of it. You're wrong.

Don't just vomit words out then hit the submit button. When you do that, you end up having garbage like this published. You need to read it multiple times before you hit that submit button. If you don't want to do that, then just write for yourself; don't sunbird.

Hi @cageysea9725

Appreciate the critique, I will strive for a better one next time