by secretsubmissive23
If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything at all. Or at least don't be a coward and hide behind the anonymous tag. It's just rude...
Ohh My...
I can, easily, say a lot of nice about this story :-)
I guess, and hope, this is only the beginning (fingers crossed) - you have started a plot made for an, insanely, great story - if people want “easy reading” there is PLENTY of that all over. This one can be so incredible great and I, for once, hope that you will write a lot of new, exciting chapters to this story, subbie *Winks*
Bastarden
The trust has been broken so any contract us null an void an he's just being a abuser if he lays a hand on her the key word is consensual even in punishment or its abuse. Great story though. Hope she makes him pay
Trust has gone so with that safe sane an consensual leaves the relationship so he’s turned from a Dom to just another abusive arsehole she needs to lay this out before she turns from submissive to abuse victim