All Comments on 'Enduring a Hen Party'

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NYCSeparatedWM50 about 10 years ago

Loved it!

I enjoyed this story - it had a couple of unexpected twists and turns, was vivid and realistic, and well written - thanks for writing and sharing!

Screenwriter66 about 10 years ago

Psychological Realsim

One of the simple failures of most erotica is not drawing the reader into an authentic world of people and emotions. I felt her boredom, her embarrassment, and her desire to get off by herself. The ending was a little expected, but it allowed for the realistic staging of being watched. Anyway, I look forward to more from you...