All Comments on 'English Rose Ch. 06'

Aww, that was sweet, a little bittersweet, and you're starting to let us into the darker creases of Marcus's mind. I do hope he gets his happy ending. Can't wait to know about his past. :) You write a great story, keep it up! Very glad things got patched up with Sabrina and Douglas.

I eagerly await the next chapter. :)

le kitty

Thank you so much for the long chapter. Loved it. The character development of Marcus really is peaking my interest. Can't wait to see more.

i am glad for the reconciliation of sabrina and douglas. i am also glad of the bridging of the gap between sabrina an the duke. i love the way you put honesty in this story. honesty is really the way to go. i was surprise you didn't end this and continued with marcus' story. well.. i am thinking u will have 4 good friends in the end here. :) i cant wait as your story unfolds. :)

I'm glad reconciliations are happening all over the place: Sabrina and Douglas, Sabrina and the Duke, etc. I feel for Marcus though. He hides all that he is behind his rake facade. The only one who truly saw him was Sabrina. In a way, I'm glad Marcus still holds her in high regard and their friendship remains. But I also understand Douglas' tension about said friendship. Great story, keep it up!

That was another great chapter. I would still like to know, what happened between Douglas' mother and Sabrina's father as I noted in chapter 4 they once shared a house... However, you captivated me with this story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work! :)

That was another great chapter. I would still like to know, what happened between Douglas' mother and Sabrina's father as I noted in chapter 4 they once shared a house... However, you captivated me with this story and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work! :)

i like the fact the sabrina realized that even though douglas hurt her in a way , thathe loved her so much that she could do nothing but love him back. the dukes reaction at first then his actions after the confession where right on the mark marcus and joan should turn to a good match, but as for his obvious lack of respect for homself i hope that that is explained as well as sabrinas father and douglas mother. i, in my opion think that even though sabrina saw the the facade and joan will to it is going to be douglas that shows him his true worth and they will become if not friends the cordial companions that support one another as i think sabrina and joan are going to bond to each other. and i can not wait for the next chapter thank you for such complex and engrossing writing

I absolutely love this story and how it is progressing. I really cannot wait for the next installment and hope that Sabrina and Doglas continue to be happy...it's just nice to see them spend time together without major drama. And poor Marcus! I hope that Joan heals him and he makes her happy in the end, i am so intrigued about what happened to make him like this! Brilliant work

that was a really good chapter, I think I even might have teared up. I love how your giving part of the story line to Marcus, but I would still like there to be plenty of focus on Sabrina and Douglas, I just don't feel like their story is anywhere over. keep the good work up, I shall wait in anticipation

Have loved this latest installment of the story, the character and love developments that you've woven. Don't want to nitpick over such a well written story but the typos and grammar mistakes were a bit distracting this time. Your (you're) mine. Nothing a little editing wouldn't fix, and thanks again for taking us on such a satisfying journey.

I am SOOO thrilled that they are back together!!! hahah LOVE IT!

I was so suprised tos ee the length of this chapter but I am not one for complaining! I loved it and I can't wait for the next one!!!

I love this story. Am so happy they are back together but i feel so sad for Marcus that he won't let himself enjoy what Joan and he obviously have. Can't wait for the next installment. More please and soon xxxx

very well-written regency story with an erotic edge. I loved the characters.

I really like this story and am glad that you've also introduced some-one for marcus. I actually prefer the marcus-joan storyline to the sbrina-douglas one.

I am going nuts waiting on a new update for Wolf lake...

I had some concerns and questions about how this story was going to progress after reading the last 2 chapters. I'm glad you stuck with it and I'm enjoying things as they unfold. I think Marcus is a better man and has more to offer than he gives himself credit for. Although his romance with Joan was a bit on the hasty side I'm interested in finding out if they can make it work and If Marcus can truly find happiness with himself and someone else. Looking forward to the continuation, thank you!

oh please, don`t leave us hanging for too long. love the story!

Would have been better with a lot less Marcus and Joan and much more of Douglas and Sabrina I loved their part of the story and would like to read more!

I like most everything about the flow of this story so far, except a bit unfairness from Douglas. He could do awful things then made amend just by marying her, while she has to torment herself and repeatedly be apologetic about one dalliance ?

Given extra-marital affairs was somewhat acceptable behavior in the gentry class, he hasn't yet got his just desert. I hope you make him work hard to make up for the rest of it in later chapters

Please update!! i cant wait to read the next chapter.

stop hiding, I am eager to find out, what happens next! :D

good work

I can't wait to see what happens next with both couples!! And I really can't wait to see what happens when Joan and Sabrina finally talk - almost as much as I can't wait to see Marcus and Douglas finally confront each other! I imagine they'll become great friends and allies after some issues are worked out.

I can't wait to see what happens... I love the story with Sabrina and Doughlas, but I'm really excited to see what is going on with Marcus and see that relationship advance. Can't wait to read more!

-Mel

i love this series!!!!

This is the best story ever. I'm addicted to it and can not wait for the rest to follow.

The Best you are ;o)

Whish you all the best and a lot of inspiration.

P

xxx

It's safe to say that this is the best story of this type that I've ever read on this site. I've seen a handful of stories that begin with rape and try to move on to actual romance, but the characters and the plot never sit well with me--they're just not believeable through the transition. You've done such a great job with that. I really like how the main characters' story has played out, and I'm definitely intrigued by Marcus! I've been wondering about his dark secret since we first saw him. I hope he reveals it soon, and doesn't make Joan suffer in the dark for too long!

Best of luck with whatever may be going on in your real life, so that you have the luxury of time to spend on your fantastic stories!

I was so excited when I saw that you had moved forward with the story (last time I checked you had only 2 chapters). This is one of my most favourite stories, full of depth, darkness and quiet strength. Thank you so much for continuing and I look forward to any new developments.

i can honestly say that u have made my day with this story!! i read it all at once i couldn't help myself this is one of THE best stories i have read in a long time and trust me it is a very short list especially where romance is concerned!!! please keep writing!!

i really love this story! its the best i've read so far! please update it soon!

I read the entire story so far in one go, I just couldn't stop after the first chapter. I am really looking forward to reading more.

Love the story! Can't wait to read more about Marcus and Joan!!!

How wonderful to come across a story that is full of depth, passion, romance and sexual tension, all beautifully conveyed with a surety of touch. Your story has the perfect balance, being neither heavy handed or too insipid. Once started, I had to read every chapter and I'm now writing this at 5am in the morning, finding myself desperately wanting the story to continue! I hope you continue writing, revealing what the dark secret is that Marcus holds inside him and whether Joan and/or Sabrina will help him to vanquish it. I also want to hear more of Douglas and Sabrina. You have drawn your characters so well that they are living, breathing beings in my imagination! Please don't keep us waiting too long!

Great story! I love Marcus and Joan and I can't wait for more of their story. Hope you have a chance to update soon!!

I really love how this folds out. I particularly like how she did not just simper and become a victim like most do women do in similar scenarios. This was an angry woman and in her anger/ sorrow decided to challenge what was mandated of her. I say Bravo! And thank you.

I reread this chapter and I can't wait to see this continue! I really want to know more about Marcus's past, and I hope that Joan is just what he needs.

Please please don't take too long with the next installment. This story has me on the edge of my seat. I can wait to hear more about Marcus and Joan. I like the darkness of the characters. They're real. Life doesn't always work out one hundred percent perfectly, and our trials bond us together, and make us stronger and more interesting individuals. The introduction of two such characters as Joan and Marcus, so opposite can only lead to some interesting reading. I am waiting in anticipation! Congratulations on an amazing story so far.

I can't wait for the next part! Please have it ready soon! :-)

OHHH WOOOWW!!!! I love it. Read all 6 parts. And now will wait impatiently for more. Give us more very soon: D

I can't remember the last time I've been so engrossed. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love the way the stories have been intertwined. And hope Marcus can open himself to love Joan. You create very nice characters flaws and all!

Kudos!!!

Nooooo! Don't leave!

Interesting. You've made us actually root for Dougie, and not Sabrina, with her ridiculous inability to keep her legs closed, and then shouting it from the rooftops. That's nicely done, since Dougie is the rapist after all. :)

This business about Sabrina not wanting to hurt him, and not meaning to ruin any reputations, his or her own, sounds like a bunch of bullshit to me. She is a clever girl, and for her not to be aware of what was happening would have been incredibly dumb. I guess she was throwing whatever she could think of at Dougie at the time to try to get him to forgive her.

The downside of Sabrina's little trip to CheapWhore -land is that the sex with her and Dougie now seems completely blah and boring. Because she reacts, thinks and sounds EXACTLY the same as she did when she was doing Marcus, and would no doubt feel the same no matter who she was sleeping with. Which makes me feel that Dougie is being deceived big time.

And what's going on with Dougie being all calm and serene about his wife going to see her asshole ex-lover who was happy to disrespect her left, right and centre the entire time they were together??? This doesn't sound right. I would imagine he would have lot more balls than that. And attending the wedding??? She is dumb and disrespectful to the bride by showing up, and Dougie seems to have been invaded by an alien that's keen to FURTHER the "friendship" between his wife and her lover.

Oh give me a break. Dougie is a man. Please don't make him into a 13-year old teenage girl with this nonsense and the "we're working through our issues" stuff.

Still enjoying the story, keen to see what's coming up, and hoping the real Dougie will surface soon. xxx

You just expect me to believe that? That he would just accept her after her whoring. I could not imagine a husband just plainly and blindly accept all her debauchery. You should not write.

Your ability to tell a great story is impressive. But it's so distracting that every single time you should've used "than" you used "then" instead. Also, "conscious" means awake/aware; "conscience" is the part of the mind that makes us feel guilty about things. There are many other typos and spelling errors that are completely understandable, especially given the length of your story. However, the two I've pointed out were used incorrectly repeatedly, indicating that you truly don't know the difference. That being said, despite the egregious and frequent grammar and spelling errors, I've read every word you've written. So kudos on a fabulous story, but for the love of god, get an editor!

So....he RAPED her, right? Yet he has a right to be angry or judge her actions? More fool me. I was so hoping for a strong female character.

Am greatly enjoying your craft. And, those who don't just read right over the minor edit issues I have a feeling the story is not written for anyway.

honestly, what a whore and a lying bitch. ewww