by androgynousLavender
OMFG!!! This was sick and twisted and one of the HOTTEST stories I've ever read. So how sick am I, that all I want to do is trade in my older sister for a hot sleep walking older brother. Hopefully, more beer and another night's stay at the motel will get us at least one more story like this from you. Easy five stars, thanks. Yours sincerely, MLF
I'd love a continuation of this where it turns out he was completely aware of all this.
Sweet tale
Lovely in-between-consciosness event, so alluring, at the edge of all manner of trangressions. Well captured inner thoughts, delicious sensual descriptions.
Needs a sequel. Would love for the brother to start being conscious of what's happening/ or is already aware and just played along.
Well written, and extremely hot! You took us right into that motel room with them, and I loved the chance to be a voyeur watching their brotherhood. I always wanted a brother like this - thanks for helping me to live another chapter of the fantasy through your words!