Entertaining quickie story of a quickie interlude. I would change only one thing: I would have given names to the amorous couple instead of just "He" and "She." Giving names personalizes characters, as it did to the Miller family.
Just getting started. English is not my mother tongue, so I will gladly accept help from any willing editor on that. I also wrote a couple of stories in my language, hope to translate them and present them here one day. Otherwise I am fascinated by stories. No porn or picture...