All Comments on 'Enjoying the Alps'

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ChippymintonChippymintonover 3 years ago

Erotic and comical. Good job. I must go skiing again sometime!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Entertaining quickie story of a quickie interlude. I would change only one thing: I would have given names to the amorous couple instead of just "He" and "She." Giving names personalizes characters, as it did to the Miller family.

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Just getting started. English is not my mother tongue, so I will gladly accept help from any willing editor on that. I also wrote a couple of stories in my language, hope to translate them and present them here one day. Otherwise I am fascinated by stories. No porn or picture...