All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 12'

Please make your text only stories free for everyone on your website rawlyrawls.com

and put Google ads (Adsense) on yor free content

And charge a fees to remove the ads (on text only stories)

That way more people will visit your website and Google will pay you a good amount

Chapters 1 - 25 are complete. Chapters will arrive on Literotica about a month apart.

If you want to read them sooner, or feel like supporting my writing, you can do that here: https://rawlyrawls.com

Thanks for reading!

Why are you submitting chapters, that barely have any content, a month apart. As a matter of fact, I'm not sure why you are posting stories on this site. Oh, wait, I know why, your delusional idea of having people pay to read them on your site is not working out too well is it. Oh, im sure you have conned some dumbasses on your site, but it's obvious you haven't conned enough of them, otherwise you would never have put them on a free site.

Good story. Thank you very much for posting it. Your stories are much appreciated. And to the "delusional" anon who attempted to bust rawlyrawls balls below, hey, at least Rawly provides the entire story for free, eventually. If you want to "nuke" someone, nuke the author who calls himself "Klrxo". He posts the first chapter of his series for free, but unless you pay you never get to see any more of the story. He holds his stories hostage. Thanks again, Rawly.

I really, really, really hate Fred.

I absolutely agree with the first post , using Ads for reading your text only stories will both grant you well deserved money and give tons of people the possibility to read them for free and eventually push them to pay for access the illustrated one.

A win - win proposition

Thanks for posting. Worth waiting for. Keep on keeping on.

To answer the question of changing my site to ad-based revenue. I appreciate the idea, but I'm very happy with how the site is performing, and I certainly don't want to fix it if it ain't broke.

5 stars - great story - please keep going

Why would I nuke Klrxo for conducting his business correctly. Obviously, the parents for the anon from 17 days ago need to get their money back for your lack education, because you clearly sucked a truck load of dick just to make out of school. When someone is trying to make money off of writing stories, they don't post all of them for FREE! They entise you to want to pay for reading all of the story. All I'm saying, is that dipshit Rawls here needs to either do one or the other. It's fucking ridiculous to wait two years to read a whole story, and no I'm not stupid enough to pay to read sex stories on another site. Someone would have to be in the same category of greatness, like James Patterson, for me to even remotely consider paying to read stories. And believe me, this guy will never ever be competent enough to even finish a story correctly

The last chapter and this one have not been connected to the next chapter.

Enjoying the story but some pieces don't add up. The main character's sole dedication to his mother's welfare is supposed to be the catalyst for her willingness to engage sexually with her son but that definitely only works in fiction. Women want a much stronger man that the one who is being portrayed. Also, the mother took a huge load of his semen and then didn't appreciate his use of the word cum; again a bit farcical. I'm not sure this really changes the rating or view on the story but these are pieces that are more imaginary then fiction. Creative and sexy tale. Thanks for sharing. 4.5/5