All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 29'

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Good chapter. Thanks.

How can you craft such a amazing story! I have been reading this for what feels like 3 years! Please keep it up!

givith and takith away. Great read!

long overdue to end

This has been a most entertaining story. Don't ever stop because I love your writing .

"Oh, no." Alyson put his arm over her shoulders and helped him to a chair.

That should be Kate instead of Alyson.

Also, maybe have an indication of the repetition so it doesn't feel wrong.

"I have ankles?", he repeated playfully.

Nick video taping his dad having an affair with another woman on the golf course, is one way to break apart his parent's marriage and trim that poisonous vine. Also getting his dad arrested from hospitalizing him in a blind rage is another way to trim that poisonous vine.