All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 32-33'

What a satisfying ending to an amazing story. And thanks a lot for publishing the last 2 parts together.

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Yay I’m really glad Maggie is back, what a great ending. Thank you for the great story!

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I have enjoyed this story. Good ending. Thank you.

While Maggie doesn't remember him or his family he *does* remember her.

It kind of gives him a leg up like the multiple todays did with his mom, especially adding in his ability to 'read the room' so well.

And except for not remembering him, she's unchanged - she's adventurous, she's a bit wild, she's not especially averse to incest, and she's willing to believe the unbelievable.

Odds are good he'll end up married to her... and having her have sex with his mom and sister as well.

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Wonder if Enki will upgrade Maggie as the closest he'll ever come to an apology...? Not likely, I guess...

Fantastic ending, thank you very much.

It was a pleasure to read, even piecemeal.

I think enki should have given Maggie back or nick just left her bebehind.he's acting like a child "he took my toy and I want it back".move on already just like other people do when they break up.

2 and a half YEARS later.....

Great story! I enjoyed it very much. One thing I didn't understand, though, was wouldn't the father be entitled to half of everything, including the house, in the divorce? Especially since there were no minor children, and apparently they didn't notify the police about the assault on Nick. So, I wondered why the mother apparently got the house in the divorce. But thank you for posting. I am seriously considering joining your site.

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I don't see it as him having broken up with Maggie.

It's more like her parents moved far away taking her with them. Or, more simply, she just had an accident and got amnesia.

The person who was Maggie didn't *want* to break up with him, she was forced to.

Unless Enki decides to punish him more (I don't think that's really likely in this case) I suspect they'll end up together again.

i liked the story overall.

i do feel the last riddle did drag a bit. it was not that hard to work out.

Maggie was disappointing because why have the relationship building earlier to just dump her and him make no effort with her until years later. doesn't make sense. it would have been better for her to get her memories back too.

Dammit, I do hate when you end a series but of course you have to. This was another great story and I do like the outcome. My name is Peter and I' a Rawls-a-holic. Can't wait to see whats next.

I think the story overall was very good, but I think the ending could have been better.

Am i got lost at something or this story is just a damn incestious NTR cuckold story? Like all 3 of them is so fucked up in their mind? Espescially Kate? Girl literally cheated with her son?!! And when Fred caught the siblings naughty she literally mad at him for beating them?!! Like who wouldnt do that when witnessed such things? And when hes not sorry, girl literally dumped him, and continue fucking her son! And kick her husband out of the house! Damn!!

I think we can all agree that Fred is poor af! Bro got NTR'ed and kicked out of the house fr!

Worth the wait!

This didn't feel as rushed as some of the others near the end

Maggie should have got her memories back

Wish there would be a follow up where Maggie came into the group again

Nasty stunt for the author to pull giving us just a whisper at the very end that she would return.

Good story, entertaining.

Well done.

I really liked this entire series. I looked forward to each episode, and relatively satisfied with the pace. Most of the sex scenes were very well done, However, this last episode was a little anti-climatic. I expected more intensity in the sex scene when the mother finally agrees to the son cumming inside her. Otherwise, great series. Thanks for writing it.

Definitely a great tale.i had started a ways back, but got lost in other stories. Glad I came back.

Oh thank you, I was really afraid maggie would be left out... To bad we don't get a foursome in the story...

I look for similar stories by OTHER WRITERS. Can someone, please, introduce some other stories.

5 stars - I have liked most of this writers stories and this is just one more on the PLUS side.

Great story, please keep writing.

Have a nice day

extra ordinary!

Damn, after all this ass to mouth?

Fantasy and reality will rarely meet,,,,,, Hopefully!

Should not have voted on previous chapters.

This story was awesome, I know I am late to the party but being so meant that I didn't have the wait for new installments, I enjoyed the whole thing. There were parts that I didn't like with the father but it was necessary for the overarching story. Though there were minor issues here and there like using the wrong name (Ashley instead of Alyson) and a few places where words seemed to be missing in sentences, still one of the best written and most immersive stories on Literotica. There were plenty of places where the story tugged at my emotions and filled me with elation. I will be checking out other ventures by this author. A heartfelt thanks to rawlyrawls for making this available free on this platform and kudos on other stories that may appear here in the future. 5/5 keep up the great work.

Love this! Started first 4 on audio and I was hooked. I know it was really out there alittle farfetched but couldn't stop! Ever morning doing my workout on the elliptical machine reading the next chapter! Couldn't wait till the next day to read another chapter. Keep writing darling your so talented.

Idaho cowboy

I gotta say this is one of the few long forms stories that have ever stuck with. It moved at a very good pace and the characters were engaging. Well done and give us another like this soon.

Well thought out. Great story. Thank you.

Great story. Awesome story telling.

Great series, essentially keeps the reader in a constant state of arousal! Thanks for all of your hard work!

Respect!

You sir are a wizard.

Loved it , binged it, 5 stars