All Comments on 'ENM Intertwined - Avery Pt. 21'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Definitely too short. We want more!

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Is it possibly you could write more? There's too much gap between chapters. People strat to lose interest.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Thank you for deciding to continue. I can't wait to read what happens to Avery next. Wander what the outcome of his email is going to be. Hope Aveyr is going to be tricked to become full time prof. Sanders model.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Over two months passed an nothing happened. Abandoned story.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great story. I was hoping that around summer time/holidays, more would be posted of Avery's (miss)adventures. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Let's hoe the author is not dead.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I come back daily to check if there's a new chapter.. Love this story, and really wish there will be more people to see him, more humiliation, more posing, more colleagues in the audience...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

What happened after email?

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

111 days and counting. No new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

""Don't forget to send your response tonight. And don't argue about how long your extension will be." Delia reminded me." So how long is the extension going to be?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

As of today 132 days have passed without continuation. Sad.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I'm so hoping this story would continue, at least for ne more chapter.

Hopefully exposing Avery to even more strangers and colleagues. Would be lovely to have him come in front of them.

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I find erotica to be at it's best in written format. There is nothing better than reading something juicy and picturing what's going on inside your head. A story tends to be more scintillating than a picture.

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