All Comments on 'Enough's Enough Ch. 01'

I'll follow this.

I really liked your story, it flowed well. So more please!

I hope you continue along this line. She sounds like a parasite that needs a few lessons in not taking things for granted. She deserves to be humiliated with some re-training, ha ha.

Female parasites who expect others to look after them with just a batting of their eyelashes should be dealt with! Bring it on! I don't blame your male character doing things his way, for a change. Well done that he can.

I think this is a hell of a start and she will get what she deserves... who knows this may be what she was looking for all along she needs the care but also the strength as well no more mr nice guy

for a story of the blackmail angle. On a personal note, I really really hate height and weight described in numbers... 5'11", 200 pounds. 5'4", 100 pounds + 20 pounds. C cup. Heck, I like numbers, (love math), BUT THEY DONT TURN ME ON!!! And, no, five elleven, twohundred, five four, one hundred and twenty added, doesn't fix it for me. Shred those numbers and gimme the taller than her muscular hunk looking down at her shorter, more slender, shape. Sorry for being mean about it -- hey at least I didn't let it affect my vote... It is after all my own fault for reading past the first 5'11''. Can I help it if what you wrote before the 5'11'' was so promising that I couldn't stop myself from continuing?

You characters are well diffined & you have a plot!!!

Good work, I looking forward to more.

She's going from someone who just sleeps around on her to a rapist? Why?

Rough gritty and delightful, keep twisting and turning those gears until this becomes the polished art it should be