All Comments on 'Enslaved by the Pen Ch. 01'

Incredible! I have goosebumps!!

Thank you for reading and for your encouraging words Anonymous. It's my first attempt at erotica.

Fantastic! Thank you for writing this!

I have never commented on a story before - but this was outstanding! More! I need more!!!

Captivating keep up the story intrigued to see where it goes

Thank you for the chapter. One of the best for sure.

I think it was obvious it was El but this is a great start. He is super hot!! Great dialogue. Excellence writing

Thank you all for the comments and for reading my work.

Great story, well written, edited carefully, a great deal of care with details, and beautifully hot scenes. It doesn't get better than this. Easily five stars. Thanks.

Thanks Morpheme!

This doesn’t make it BDSM, far from it. It makes him an unhinged psychopath. BDSM is a consensual exchange of power claiming other makes it Stockholm Syndrome. How is she supposed to trust him endlessly to be able to freely submit ?

Very well written and it flows quite well too. It’s just that major flaw in the plot that spoils it.

Tess (uk)