All Comments on 'Ensuring Some Vows are Followed'

5 stars love it!!!

Ditto - 012Say

fucking great original story

i love when cheaters and would be cheaters don t prosper

this story warms my heart

good job in restoring some faith in people that do not condone cheating of any sort

the bitch got what she deserved a life of misery

hope her idea of cuckolding her spouse was worth it

5* hundreds of hardons and a huge tingling in my balls

Effing brilliant! Laughed my a$$ off at every turn!

Creative, entertaining, well-written. Thanks for the story.

Ed

Great story. Only she should have gotten "Life in Prison" for her crimes against humanity. Thanks for the story. Definitely a 5* in my book.

Its very hard to do something original in this category but you did! Bravo easy 6 stars

Bahaha! That's how you kick butt and take name's. Thanks for your time 🤠.

Very amusing. 5

Fun, wouldn’t be surprised if the live-in nanny’s name was Jackie!

Awesome! The Bear approves. 5 stars. Too bad there was no background on the bitches ideas to cheat. Oh, well, the guy is better off.

The BEAR

Oh that was indeed fun. full marks for you.

Fun und Funny!

11/10!!!!!

cute

Sometimes I need a story like this! Made my day. 5 Stars.

Definitely a fun little story.

bravo! finally a bitch gets her just rewards!

Well worth suspending belief for an entertaining little tale like that one. Many thanks

Quirky and entertaining

Funny!

Different. Entertaining. Realistic, no but you did warn us. Four stars.

Well written but never really caught my interest since I'm not into mental anguish or torment. Agree that there needed to be some sense of reason about why poor Taylor suddenly decided threaten Gary and then take on multiple lovers. Gave me more a WTF feeling.

Entertaining.

EXCELLENT! Maybe George "the CUCKY BOY" Anderson will get Marc LaValliere to intercede!

A wonderful Short. Sharp. Shock! Loved it!

Great story. Brilliant revenge plot by the husband.

Interesting premise, THANK YOU VERRRRY MUCH (in an Elvis voice).

Boink! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

wooo this one sparked up some comments lol

But don't give me this shit about being blind sided or caught unawares. She's your fucking wife! What are her values, her dreams, her fears, her ethics, her morals? How does she embrace and reflect her loyalty, her passion, her commitment, her dedication? You know about her favorite colors and patterns, but you don't know she's an arrogant selfish soulless murderous monster? I guess she was only Dr. Jekyll around you; kept Mr. Hyde tucked out of sight until she needed him.

The only reason you get a high score from me is because you essentially killed the bitch. But nowhere in the story do you describe some great change in her personality, her character, her intellect. Which means he got what he married, and therefor deserved it. So nice solution, but NO sympathy. If his second marriage is successful long term it will be pure luck. This guy is too ignorant and shallow to be a good husband. God help the kids. And thanks for the effort.

Wahoo, its hot nanny time

play stupid games, win stupid prizes

Do people really hate women that much on this site? Wowzers!

Awesome!

Regards

Stiixx

My second comment, excuse me. I saw Reed Richards - we were warned, "Those who want their fiction to mirror reality might want to skip this one."

While it is a fairly common start to a story; hubby, I am going on a date to get laid and will ruin you if you do anything about it - I can't think that is really something that occurs. This story is about a response, a very clever response. Some people don't seem to question the premise - they think the response outrageous.

I would say just the reverse is true. If threatened with ruination because wife wants to wander, a bold NO is fair game. Clearly, a farce - one must love the equity; I think it is from the Mikado - my object oh sublime, I shall achieve in time, to have the punishment fit the crime - this seems a good fit.

As I read the story, the ending I envisioned was wifey going back to hubby and saying, "dating was a bad idea" and everyone lives happily ever after. M&M decided wifey had more spine and less ethics - she wasn't to be deterred and ended up detained. What could be fairer than that?

Quick and fun.

Loved it, well done author. The bitch deserved it.

Ha-ha. Good one.

YES ,YES, *****

😂😂😂😂😂

5stars

Yes, something a bit clever for a change. Full marks. Thanks for posting.

Figuring out WHY Taylor wanted to fuck around would have been a pointless exercise and a waste of time and energy. Instead, Gary put all his energy into protecting himself from a heartless mega bitch that threatened him with ruination by going on the offensive with a great psych-ops campaign against Taylor. In the end Taylor was a victim of her own hubris.

Loved it ! Unique story line -

Exactly what you warned us it would be 😆

Well, I guess that's one way to handle it. 4*

How can a story be more weird? I don't know. 5* for originality.

Interesting "way" of dealing with a horny wife who wants to stray. Well written with a twisted plot and lots of intrigue. Where did she get the money to pay a cop hitman?

A bit over the top, but brilliant plot!

Nice change of pace. Great story

Very interesting

Kenna became Jenna At the end of the story ... an attempt to shield her from her mother ?

Ah to see the micro phallus, RAAC cucky boys shed tears over this one...

Ohhh, nice twist on an often told divorce story. Say “BYE” to the Clown Lady. 5*s.

Great story! Had me ROTFLMAO. Five stars ⭐️ for this one. Keep ‘em coming, moreandmore!

Although this was NOT a "Loving Wives" story, it was a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A selfish, "entitled" BITCH wanted her cake and eat it too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I guess none of "her friends" were smart enough to figure her a "safe" way out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED THIS PARTICULAR "BURN THE BITCH"!!!!!!!!!! But this should have been posted in the "Non-Erotic" category!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE WAS NO SHARING!!!!!! THERE WAS NO SWINGING!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE WAS NO MARRIED EXTRA-MARITAL FUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO THAT KICKS THE SHIT OUT OF IT BEING A "LOVING WIVES" STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT A LOVING WIVES STORY!!!!! NOT A LOVING WIVES STORY!!!!! NOT A LOVING WIVES STORY!!!!! NOT A LOVING WIVES STORY!!!!! NOT A LOVING WIVES STORY!!!!!

Interesting, but dark.

And it still amaze me how many stories where men get married with fucked up chicks, are they really that bad at judging the character? Guess most marry for the looks, not for the personality.

I loved it, nothing like a little domestic terrorism. The wife hiring a hit man I didn't see coming but she did get what she deserved after her demands on the husband. As far as men's reason for getting married, part of the reason stems from the little head doing the evaluation and reasoning.

🤣

I liked it.

Not everybody likes dark humor,

but I do.

And this was a very good example of it.

The plot was unusual and interesting

and using two POVs worked perfectly here.

Top ratings from me.

OMG Love it!

Cute story, a bit different. Congratulations to Gary on a great recovery.

Thanks for your writing.

I promised my EX before the divorce THAT if she got more than 50%

She would never be able to spend it.

She didn't realize that I knew for a fact she encouraged MY 16 year old son

to sleep with a 15 year old girl. which I had confirmed before she told me she was divorcing me.

I filed, she agreed 50/50 She might not of realized just how difficult her position in court would be if she had ask for more. So some of you would think I'm a wimp. Not so because I got rid of a problem wife and my career did a major progress to the good.

Max BTB loved it. 5*****

AWESOME!! *****

A fun little tale of paranoia and revenge. 5*.

⭐⭐⭐⭐ Concise and nicely done. 👍

Wow nicely written! Served cold and right to the mind! Well done and well worth reading! Interesting and entertaining boxes checked!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

I guess I will never understand, why a wife would try to pull this shit on her husband. Divorce the guy, fine. But back him into a corner with no way out, is a death sentence for you.

5 stars

What story did she tell the news stations? Did she tell them that she planned to cuckold her husband and he didn't agree? Why didn't the news station ask him for his side of the story? If the people knew about the cuckolding, I don't think she would have got as much sympathy.

Only 4* because of that.

Loved it, she got hers and deservedly so.

Scores 5/5

Quid pro quo.

Clever, wonderfully clever. Just think about how many great lovers she'll be able to have now. LP

He played her perfectly. I find it odd, that none of the family or friends asked why Gary would try something like that, or follow up with Gary about it. The TV crew would have given Gary the seconds to say his piece.

What cuckolding? No idea what that is, or why his wife is babbling about death threats. She handed him a petition for dissolution, he has no idea WTF it's all about and he can't even ask her because she had him slapped with a restraining order. Does she have a lover? Does the lover have an angry wife who might be out to get her? All he knows is that he's had to find someplace else to lay his head and he has no f'ing idea what any of it is about.

LOL, Great !!!!! Makes me want to register the legally named "Until death do us part" Company for any future use or a PI Company, Lawyer groups etc.

They had Bird, McHale and Parish

We had Duncan, Ginobli and Parker. Interesting take on LW's, we don't really know who, what, where or when whatever happened to cause her to file for divorce. We only have a hint from Gary that it might have come from customers at the bakery. From her the comment that he was crazy enough to come up with the plot. Then there is the 'lost gambling' money. That's all folks. Hey, it's another flash story and ya don't get all of the juicies in one of those so live with it. be happy it wasn't a 750 word entry or at least one of the clues wouldn't be clues. Fun story, unless of course you are Taylor. Signed: BTW

The best-laid plans of mice and men (and women) do often turn to shit ......

Just love how you take care of cheating sluts ad arrogant wives who think their husbands are bound to do whatever they want. Absolutely glorious!

Loved it? Very original ending. Loved the way he played her.

I wish I would have had that number to call .

Put a smile on my face, silly but good

Lol, like it!

Great stuff! Loved it. Even though I have no interest in American sports the last line made me laugh out loud. Five stars!

Enjoyed. Thanks for your writing.

Another original by M&M (insert smiley face emoji here).

I even enjoyed the joke at the end. Oh, wait! That wasn't a joke? It really happened? Oh, those poor, poor Celtics fans - embarrassed after SOOOOO many years of ego boosting success. Better luck next season.

Keep 'em comin'!

In real life could a wife really do something like this? And then actually defeat him in court? Take his kids and all his money? That cant be how the real world is...right?

god I'm terrified

VERY CLEVER!

That's novel. I liked it.

A fun read! Full of shits and giggles!! Thanks

Unique counter to the cheater' ultimatum. A little far fetched but hey this is fictional stories and entertaining stories are what is important. Just my thoughts are I am glad she was punished. Took prison for her to get some strange...

Creative.

Great quick story, truly a BTB ending. Poor Taylor, all she wanted to do was make her husband a Cuck and have it all. Hope she likes her lesbian lovers.

Hilarious read. Thanks for writing.

When are they going to change divorce laws in the USA. Seems to me for a forward thinking country, you are really backward.

How do you do that inso few words. 5 stars from me

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Anonymous14 days ago

When are they going to change divorce laws in the USA. Seems to me for a forward thinking country, you are really backward.”

Feminazis and their sycophants have spent decades pushing new divorce laws which will near always weigh heavily in favour of women, while inflicting as much pain and damage as possible on men. The man-hating portion of the feminist movement appears to be but a small minority, but they seem to be the ones driving the bus through their very vocal and strident efforts.

pretty cute

Best “Honey, we have to talk” story ever!

Absolutely love this. Gary has every reason to perpetrate this psychological attack but I love the fact that we only see the effect on the hateful, evil wife. I love the fact that zTsylir did end up with multiple lovers.....while in prison.

You mean this didn't really happen? Shit, ....

What a delightfully amazing BTB! Thank you! 10 easy stars.