All Comments on 'Entering Her Service Ch. 01'

wanted to like this but fat chicks aren't sexy to me. Well written though. Sure some will enjoy this series. 4*, -1 for the big girl. lol

but I don't see you holding true with your premise. It doesn't appear to be any different from the "stereotypical" D/s relationship. Here is a man who stands ready to be dominated and meets a woman who must prove her dominance by taking his ass and dressing him up in panties and stockings. It also seems like he'll be required to eat his ejaculate when and if he orgasms. There! All the elements of a stereotypical story. I'd have liked it more if the man was more of a man with a submissive side, a man with needs and self respect, than an inherently dependent weakling as you probably are going to portray him to be. Now, I may be wrong, in fact I want you to prove me wrong, but this is what I think based on the current standing of your story.

Good luck though.

Fyr