All Comments on 'Entrapped in Her Panties'

Before you write a fantasy, you should at least make it believable. Superglue won't attach your hand to a bathroom stall. And the implants would not adhere either. So this little fable fails at that point. And you really think a married man would trade underwear like that? Even the biggest players would see right through that little farce. All-in-all this story failed. Too many unbelievable, improbable aspects.

What a story!!!!!! Read so many times!!! Love it & would love done to me please,ha.x

The final reveal and the way the male character is left are brilliant. There were a few things about the descriptions ("the low cut dress clung onto her wonderful curves") that I felt were too close to cliche but the concept was inspired. Nicely done.

Your grammar is awful.

Some of your sentences are all.wrong.

'Shall I get us a drink whilst you are gone?'

Why whilst and not while?

Though not exactly realistic a very hot story. Love his reaction to wearing her panties

Man you'd have to be deaf, dumb and stupid to start that charade. But it's an easy problem. Grab a waiter or busboy, get some clothes and then go to a hardware store to get some acetone or Goofoff. Glue removed, problem solved.

Though a bit farfetched this is a very erotic story. I love how she lured him in and his inability to resist. The description of the physical effects of him wearing her panties is super-hot. And the way she teased him equally super-hot. Overall a very arousing story