All Comments on 'Eric Olafson, Neo Viking Vol. 02'

I dont normaly comment on here. I wantes to give my compliments on the depth of world building you have done in your story so far. The level of detail you have provided with races and worlds and society both on the neo viking planet and the universe at large rivals any great scifi. Character development is great and stiry ptogression makes sense. The only part i have had trouble connecting with is the gender dismorphia shown by the main character. Yet i have to say it has been handled well and is done in a way that both shows a progression that makes sense alnog with not being the overiding force of the story. I sincerily hope you continue this story. I cant wait to see where you go next. I feel as if you have laid enough crumbs that it gives me ideas as to where your taking the story without knkwing just how your going to get there. Well done!

I enjoyed this story so much but would love to see more where can I get it

For those that may not be aware, sadly Vanessa passed away last November.

The remaining 8 parts of the Erica Olafson story are available for free on another site, although you have to register.

A very intriguing and complex story line, but continuously compromised by confusing lack of conventional punctuation, spelling and grammar, way too many times to even begin to itemize here.