by MariaTrans694U
Great beginning. This is going to be fun. Great pacing and just the right amount of detail
Wow! Just wow! Already on the edge of my seat. Please hurry with the next part!
Really like the story so far. Can’t wait to read other parts. Please do continue, because I can see so many possibilities with what you’ve written so far and can’t wait to see which direction you choose.
Well written and an actual story. Alot of these stories are a one sided timeline, with phrases like, "what else could I do". This one actually has a plotline with decision making.
Well thought out, a refreshing change from the usual forced femme stories. More please luv Chloe <3
Really, really good! And well-written, too! It’s hard, I know, but you’ve nailed it. Now, we need more!
Really remarkable story! The story line is direct and interesting., Wish very much to read any additional parts of this story.