All Comments on 'Erica and the Prviate Detective'

These Erica stories just keep getting better and better!

Love this one too. I can just imagine you ;-)

Mike.

Keep up the writing Claire, I love your stories :)

Every time that I go back and re-read these stories about Erica, they seem to get hotter and hotter! I can actually visualize this girl, from her face, shape of her tits, her dress, etc.. These stories ae so well written that I can almost taste this girlls young pink pussy! I've read quite a few stories on here over the years that were done really well..... but Claire out does all of them! Thanks again for another well done story to the Erica series!

Claire 2010 your something else!! what a way to put in a story break!!

OMG I'm dying to know what happens next!!

You got a talent for this babe I'm so hooked on your fantasy stories, its better than the Penthouse forums I use to read he he!

I clap my hand for you but their kinda sticky xxx Whiskey1965

As always excellent story

Alfred

You did it !

this tory was filled with dirty sexy,action and I was hard in no time, almost didn't make it through the whole story and then you stop with the blow job!!

Your a wicked sexy writer and I am so looking forward to part 2 like never before!

I hope you get tunred on writing this, I can almost see you writing as your panites become wet, smiling at how all of use will be sitting here with hard ons loving you stories,? xxx James

Your readings are so hot and ALL your written stories would be superb read by you. Also look for an external Mac microphone, so you can move around freely.

This got my cock so hard and I stroked as I read fast and faster then....OMG I'm dying for chapter 2 Please hurry and Please do this one as an audio so I can listen to you talk dirty about your cunt,your fuckhole and all that no panties stuff that just adds to your slutty goddness in your sexy accent.

I hope you post a pic on your bio page one day so we can all see the naughty girl who makes us hard and who we dream about all day!!

Bad Daddy 998

Oh Claire, Erica where can I get a pair of your panties so I can enjoy your wet love juice?? Your one super nova slutty writer and rock my world babygirl hell yeah.

I ain't kidding about them panties, I just aint afraid to ask . : 0

another bad daddy

More Erica rape stories!!!!! This storyline keeps getting better and better.

After a few minutes thats what I was!

Can't wait to see where this goes?!

It's so dirty and raw I love it!

Erica is a happy ending read for me and Claire 2010 has one of the sexiest accents that leave's this daddy drained !

Please tell this daddy all about your cunt and your ass!!

These Erica stories are so hot! I can't wait for more to see what happens next to her. Keep them coming.

For those of you who don't read Claire 2010's bio your missing out on a pic link of this smoking little hottie!

She rocks us with her written word and seduces us with her voice,now you got a pic to enjoy also.

http://www.imagebam.com/image/9b224c68193280

xxxJames

I just saw the new picture of Claire 2010,this sure makes this Daddy very Happy and horny!

You got a very yummy body my dear .

Your spoiling me you naughty baby girl and I love it,if you ever do anymore let me know cause Daddy likes to see his sexy baby girl : P

Whiskey1965

sometimes a girl just can't get a break but she is the hottest and sexiest damsel in distress ever. Claire, your writing only gets hotter and wetter. Can't wait for the darker Erica stories! what more could possibly happen to this poor girl?!?

Another hot tale and I mean a hot tail.

Tim

poor erica, she always get taken advantage of. i loved the ending. it was such a clash of self image and desire with desire winning out. HOT!!

How much sexy can you get, your stories are definatly the sexiest stories on the web.

So dirty yet so hot.

what a hot little story and what i wouldn't give to be the character Mr. Parker and do all those things with such a hot sexy girl, maybe you would want to help me act this story out, keep them coming.

She is crying but you can tell she loves it all. It made me so hard reading it.

Such a hot story! Erica is an amazing invention, an innocent little girl who makes you feel protective but who behaves like a slut who knows no boundaries. And the author (on her bio) looks like an angel too! This must be the best Literotica has to offer.

wonderful chapter, i was cumming too

Excellent job this time, you really transitioned into her begging for it well. My only complaint (more of a request) is that she should have been fighting him more, maybe shouting something about ovulating and not wanting to get pregnant. Then, have her cum again as he does, giving into the wonderful feelings and accepting her possible impregnation.

Outstanding job young lady!

Luv the development from desperate young naive victim to willing slut. Visualizing your bio pic as that of Erica added an additional sensual element to the erotic qualities of this story..........Jay

Jesus... this one made me shoot my load so hard... I was even hard after I shot, it wouldn't go away, so I had to re-read it and shoot again. Wow.

why do you keep having her get raped? is anyone going to help her

Hahaha, you should enjoy Erica a bit more, she is the best! And no one is there to help her, which is why the story is so good!!!!!

Just started reading the stuff without audio…. You are amazing!!!!! Thank you! Would LOVE more…. If you got? 😬😍

Am beside my self with sexual excitement. This story, when the person who is supposed to come to her rescue, help her, turns around and takes advantage instead. You write that so perfectly. Plus no violence nor gratuitous cruelty. Mr. Parker was so slick.

This theme is so beyond hot. Off the chain. 🔥 🔥 🔥

🔥 it