by erossmantic
Great story. Well written. I love the sexual tension with her submission. Can't wait to see what happens next!
A must for those with high stress positions. Needs being met engaging the thrill of a lifetime with a partner like Tom. Love!
Needs to be explored further, really great idea and good writing, now just keep going...
It seems you've abandoned the idea. You developed intriguing characters inside of a open, erotic plot line. And then left the story hanging, drifting in the wind. Somehow, this seems dismissive of your readers? You write well -- and often. I wonder of you just got bored with this story? Too bad.