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All Comments on 'Erin Go Boom: Tale of a Pius Man'

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estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Liked It Very Much

The local color is good, the character believable, and the pacing is quick and holds one's attention. No grammatical or syntactical errors (I can't speak to the technical side, not being a terrorist myself).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
And the cry was No Surrender,

to terrorist scum. Of course one mans terrorist scum is anothers freedom fighter. IRA or Al queda? -- UK CYNIC. SDL

pope32767pope32767about 13 years ago
Minor nit

You don't actually come into NYC by subway, unless you take the PATH from New Jerseyt. You come in by train, bus, or airplane. Once inside, you do travel by subway.

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