All Comments on 'Erin's New Living Arrangements Pt. 01'

by stxrling

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JayGardnerJayGardnerabout 1 year ago

Great start. Can't wait for PT 2. You have left us hanging.

Mermaidlover1960Mermaidlover1960about 1 year ago

Please develop this story. Pretty hot so far!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Can't wait to hear more thank you

stxrlingstxrlingabout 1 year agoAuthor

Hiya! Thanks for the positive comments (:

I'll upload the next part tomorrow (+ the time it takes for it to get reviewed)--hope you'll all enjoy it. ^^

Emmakate88Emmakate88about 1 year ago

I really like where this is heading. You did a good job setting the scene and establishing enough backstory to get attached to characters without getting lost in minutiae. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

would love to read more

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