All Comments on 'Erin's Remembrance of Things Past'

More LW than Romance (although it's much safer here), but a very good first first effort! Doesn't need a follow up, and yet there's room.

She married someone has the hots for some jerk from her past and cheats. Where is the romance? All I see is selfishness and lust. She fucks her husband to fool him into thinking the baby might be his. Besides herself, just who does she love?

thrilling, compelling, slow-burn.

Complex but very rewarding. Love when every word is there for a purpose. I agree with the first commenter; but I WOULD like to see a follow up! (Please?)