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All Comments on 'Erotic Adventures of Abbigail Starr'

by MIssWhip32164

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Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowabout 11 years ago
Felt a little disjointed

Almost like you were telling it to yourself. The incomplete sentences, the tense jumping. Interesting tale, but a little hard to read.

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