All Comments on 'Erotic Closure Ch. 01'

A very promising start--can hardly wait to read more!

This is not even a begiining to a story. You would be well-advised to tell what happened between Aunt S and the narrator without overdoing the fetishism about girdles and stockings, which is way too wordy. Cut about half the words, make the point, and get to the story.

OK so the boy has a stocking fetish. Does he fuck his Aunt, and if so when?

It's June, not Jean...June.