All Comments on 'Erotic Invasion'

Not very likely, too bad, it could have been a good story with a little more effort and forethought. Not a bad first entry into the Lit world, but lots of room for improvement.

Loved both of your stories! Hope to read more!

This story exquisitely captures the sexual joining of a man and a woman. Perfectly written.

I don't even care about how unrealistic this is, this is my fantasy exactly and you've written it so well.

Super erotic. Made my mouth water and made me wet. I’ve liked all of your stories.

More of this please!

It fulfills a fantasy of mine.

This story seriously needs to be continued

sounds like the thing that you would get years in clink for but should really get a bullet