All Comments on 'Erotic Massage'

Beautifully related, Thanks.

Slow and sessual - lovely!

Well constructed and well paced, and very arousing. The end was just a little abrupt for me, and there are a couple of grammar lapses, otherwise this was spot on.

Your content was a five star effort. I did dock you a star for editing, though. Comma splices and quote errors got in the way of an otherwise beautiful and sexy story. Keep up the good work, and enlist a proofreader. :-)

Well told, and it was interesting how they both had their boundaries.

I assume your next chapter will be even hotter as Amanda becomes more comfortable with her new masseur.

The story " The towel and my tits " by the user blondechristine2012 I believe might have stolen this story.

thank you Amanda, for the beautiful and senstively crafted story. I really sensed you were living the wonderful massage as you wrote. I could easily imagine it was a real experience of yours, and I certainly wish it was :)

You write very well. I have learnt quite a bit from this short story!