All Comments on 'Erotic Massage'

You write very well. I have learnt quite a bit from this short story!

thank you Amanda, for the beautiful and senstively crafted story. I really sensed you were living the wonderful massage as you wrote. I could easily imagine it was a real experience of yours, and I certainly wish it was :)

The story " The towel and my tits " by the user blondechristine2012 I believe might have stolen this story.

I assume your next chapter will be even hotter as Amanda becomes more comfortable with her new masseur.

Well told, and it was interesting how they both had their boundaries.

Your content was a five star effort. I did dock you a star for editing, though. Comma splices and quote errors got in the way of an otherwise beautiful and sexy story. Keep up the good work, and enlist a proofreader. :-)

Well constructed and well paced, and very arousing. The end was just a little abrupt for me, and there are a couple of grammar lapses, otherwise this was spot on.

Slow and sessual - lovely!

Beautifully related, Thanks.