by rohitbal2003
What man that could rub two sticks together would do anything but divorce her? You need a much better story premise.
lost me. who is writing, male or female? He licks his toes? He has panties? when I have a husband - isn't she married?
Regardless of the other unkind comments, I thought the story was hot. Obviously the writer was a little aroused, too engrossed in what was being written, so what? I liked it.
I'm guessing the writer is from India. A lot of Indian writers have trouble with pronouns, saying she when they mean he.
Although the story is difficult to follow, it seems the husband wanted her to get the erotic massage against her initial judgement, so the comments about her being a whore are misguided
Angus
In your rush of desire, you have got a little mixed up on the gender.
'....cock from HIS panties'?
Once i almost felt as if this was a deliberate alienation effect, changing the POV, but then i realized that your narrative is being overtaken by your own drive towards orgasm.
Happy masturbating while typing with the other hand!