All Comments on 'Erotic Massage in Front of Husband'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What man that could rub two sticks together would do anything but divorce her? You need a much better story premise.

EdgeOfSundownEdgeOfSundownabout 1 year ago

Another anonymous, multi profile beta bitch.

Yawn .....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

lost me. who is writing, male or female? He licks his toes? He has panties? when I have a husband - isn't she married?

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

In a world of bad stories, that was really bad.

Will527Will527about 1 year ago

Regardless of the other unkind comments, I thought the story was hot. Obviously the writer was a little aroused, too engrossed in what was being written, so what? I liked it.

Angus_of_AngushireAngus_of_Angushireabout 1 year ago

I'm guessing the writer is from India. A lot of Indian writers have trouble with pronouns, saying she when they mean he.

Although the story is difficult to follow, it seems the husband wanted her to get the erotic massage against her initial judgement, so the comments about her being a whore are misguided

Angus

theclitmantheclitmanabout 1 year ago

very hot i can imagine along with the story!

GUDCHATGUDCHAT11 months ago

In your rush of desire, you have got a little mixed up on the gender.

'....cock from HIS panties'?

Once i almost felt as if this was a deliberate alienation effect, changing the POV, but then i realized that your narrative is being overtaken by your own drive towards orgasm.

Happy masturbating while typing with the other hand!

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