All Comments on 'Erotic Passionate Other Woman'

It is so hard to produce an engaging story written in the second person, but I thought this story came very very close.

Somehow the three paragraphs in the middle that switched to first person lost me. I'm not sure whether they could have been separated in some way with a sub-heading, or whether they should have continued in the first person.

Was I missing something? It is my job as a reader to stretch my imagination to encompass the author's viewpoint, but it is also the author's job to make it all reasonably accessible. Those three paragraphs seemed wrong somehow.

L