All Comments on 'Escapade'

A hot little read.

I can tell you that it is "extremely" sexy to be wearing satin panties and reading a story like this.

I have a feeling that our author may be the sort of person who also enjoys dressing with "style".

I brought a pair of yellow rumba panties with white lace trim off ebay and often wear them to out with friends, who would probably die (then beat me senseless) if they knew I was wearing women's underwear. So I agree with Tara when she says they look sexy on her.

Hopefully we'll see part 2. If you do write part 2, I'll make sure MY rumba panties are on when I read it.

Keep writing (Ms/MIss/Mr?) Da_Vida

Wasnt too taken with beginning, thought I had the wrong cat. Not into humiliation. But actually could turn into a really good storyline. Believe that Blake character could be teased out to find he isnt such a straight arrow and Tara could have second thoughts. Or Blake end up ion the receiving end. Overall interesting and sexy read with a range of feelings. Would like to see this expanded. Look forward to waht you have up your "sleeve" in the next chapter

Dude, sensational story.

I'd really like to see you develop this. These two "girlfriends" can have lots of great adventures together and I wanna read them all.

If you want an editor, pm me.

Peace

The beginning started out with echos of bad beginnings but (I'm hoping) that the freindship that seems to be developing between them will continue in a positive way.

I found this was a real turn on. I would love to have a girl like that. The gang bang was nice too

Very nice. And I bought five new pairs of panties at the Maidenform outlet on the way home tonight. Two briefs and three thongs. :)

,,, for changing narrator from first to third person in the middle of the story . An absolute no-no. One star.

An old maid school teacher speaks out.

I'm really happy for these two. I wouldn't mind seeing a continuation of this where they get closer.... dump Blake .... maybe go out of town and Tara arranges for dates.... or just a 2 girl, one hunk, date to make Jamie a real woman.

I have to agree with mumble, you don't switch from first person to third person in the middle of the story, but I give it 3 1/2 stars for effort 😊

I really enjoyed how you turned this story from one thing to another then a third. It started out a little Non-Con/Reluctance, then a little more TS/CD with MM, and finally a provocative conclusion in TS/CD with MF.

Good writing, and very enjoyable twist on a very familiar theme. Thanks.