All Comments on 'Escape'

Not a bad start. I liked the characters. I would have thought you would stretch this out more and build up to the ending. He could have dated her, Vito's family could have followed her to get revenge, Ken would save her and they could have fallen for each other along the way. Or, you could make this short and sweet. It's your call. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Why would Vito's family want revenge on HER? SHE was in the hospital trying to survive when everything went down. Now if you had said "taken revenge on her dad", who was the one who actually did something, that would make a lot more sense.

I don't know how we got hung up on this side track that has zilch to do with the story.

*steps in between both anonymous commentators*

Vito's family is waiting to see what the justice system does in regard to Jimmy before they make a decision on the subject. Now can we get back to the story?