by MrSunshineBoy
Nice start. I can’t wait to find out all the things the boys have to do to escape!
Please don't make us wait long for the next chapter . . . the clock is ticking and the cock is rising!
Any of these guys have body hair? Chest hair? Hairy abs and thighs? Let's raise the bar for cumming here! College football players are well muscled and well developed young men. Give them the added attraction of chest hair!
The mechanics and situation are really special here, the game of it all makes it stand out and is incredibly sexy! I do wish there was a little more description of the characters, both physically and emotionally. What do their bodies look like? How do they feel being seen? How do they feel seeing their teammate? If you add some detail this could be a top story.
I didn't know what this meant, "he was also tied to a steel bar that was walking horizontally across the room," What? A steel bar walking horizontally across the room. Also, the instructions for putting the lightweight cylinders on a scale on the table were vague.
I love the premises of this story! Great work! I cannot wait to binge the rest.