All Comments on 'ESP'

I liked the story where the cheater's life was destroyed and Jane ended up waiting tables. Cheaters, especially women seem to be gullible, brainless twats without a rudder.

Well written and loved it

5 Stars as Sadly My ex did that to Me . I got Pictures and Video and made copies and sent them to her family . Her Father the looser and her step Mom were not real happy with Me or her . I did meet a great Lady 10 years older then Me that taught Me what love was . Sadly a drunk Driver took her away from Me

If she was in a drug induced coma, why didn't anyone take her to the hospital? Honestly, to the person who called him a cuck MC, don't see how he is, when he confronted her after he got out of the hospital, there's literally not much he could have done, while injured in the hospital, I feel like so many people miss out on the little details

Thanks for your writing.

Honestly, she deserved to burn to death

I don't like how impersonal the entire story is. The emotions are pretty muted, the only one that comes through somewhat is her, when she proclaims her life as over, and even that is half-hearted.

no way would I allow her to see the guy let alone go out every day with him.

The death would have had a lot more meaning had it been suicide.

Cop out writings always leave me with a dirty taste. Any author who kills his protagonists shows a high level of mediocrity and a limitation to end a story! That’s why I guess he is here and not well known!

Twice as long as it needed to be and far too much unnecessary bullshit