by Loving50
You kept it up! Excellent writing and suspenseful strip. Thanks!
Wow……. a very erotic story with you bringing yourself to orgasm and I am sure he did the same! I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
Oh man, what a story! I'm hooked on your writing and you need to continue this story line. This is a definite turn on and I can visualize watching this video. If only I could be so lucky to have MY girlfriend make one for me! You're an excellent writer with a wonderful imagination......or is it that you're just writing about how you teased your lover?
I appreciate the comments. I just submitted the next part of the story. It's written, more or less, from Sean's point of view. That's a first for me - writing from a man's viewpoint. I can't say I nailed it but I do think it's pretty good. Read it when it's posted and let me know what you think.
This is NOT based on any actual part of my life but it was a fantasy that I built with an online lover once upon a time. I enjoyed writing for him and this is an extension of that.
Thanks again, I love reading comments about my stories.