by jjskylark
If previous commentator does not like any of the stories in Literotica, then why waste your time here?
jj.. I liked your story and wish to see a continuation of it.
The story is pretty bad, a poor clone of other stories here and on BDSM Library, but written in an unimaginitive and unoriginal manner.
The 100% score is completely ludicrous as is the 0% but it is way below average.
I really like this genre but this is a very poor, poorly thought out, poorly described and excessively long and tedious and essentially boring tome but I am sure it gave the writer the pleasure which the reader should have derived from it.
I guess it's hard to think, type and Jerk off at the same time....
Well I guess it is all personal taste. I loved this story and was drawn back to it several times to complete it. Well written, nice setting, loved the concept. I sincerely hope it will be the first of may such stories and I look forward to following the writer's work
An interesting theme spoilt by stilted narration,poor grammar,spelling and sentence construction.Numerous faults in the storyline spoilt the reading experience for me but the characters do have potential to develope the situation into an ongoing intriguing serial story.
Look forward to it.