All Comments on 'Ester and Larry'

Great story, I love it. AAAAA+++++

Wonderful story!

5

Yea, ordinary people win!

Nicely done. Thank you

A sweet story that was fun to read and left me smiling at the end.

Very nice. Could have had a little more story from Ester’s perspective, but was still well written and well told.

Very sweet. I love stories about real people.

Excellent story. Just loved it! 25 stars, lol

Great story....but who's Kev?

Great story.....but who's Kev?

This is a GREAT story that is very well written.

You have a great talent in writing that many will enjoy.

Write many more.

Great story, R! Your characters always feel real! Loved this one!

Great story. - just a bit unsure why it took her TWO YEARS to get back to him. That needed to be explained. 5 stars

Really enjoyed this story. It certainly was well within the realm of possibility. I’m damn glad you took the story to its logical conclusion of their marriage and kids. That is what romance stories should do. Superb story and superb writing. MM

Enjoyed it. Don't understand what the parents swinging had to do with the story. Could have left it out.

Very nice story!

Win one for the common guys! Really enjoyed the story but I have one question... Who the hell is "Kev"? When Ester came back to Larry and they were getting intimate, she said for Kev to be gentle with her. Other than that, it was a fun read with a happy ending. Thanks

Love this story for its humanity. Having said that reckon you should have broken it into two chapters and wrote more about the missing 2 years from Ester’s pint of view.

When Ester and me first started going for dinner

When Ester first started going for dinner - that makes sense.

When me first started going for dinner - doesn’t make sense.

It should read: When Ester and I first started going for dinner

Great job! Noticed the Kev, a few typos, and a couple of punctuation issues but little things like those happen to all of us. The nice thing is these characters were ordinary people finding their HEA. It’s a good reminder that there can be someone for everyone if we remember that while beauty may be skin deep, real beauty and what’s really important is what we are inside. 5*

Hey, grammar nazi. The narrating character was written as being a poor student. Why should he narrate in perfect grammar? I can’t stand it when people expect characters to narrate their story as if they are English teachers. It takes away from the charm of how the character is written.

Good one, 410. I enjoyed it.

Nice story, I always like seeing stories about us normal looking people. We aren't all Greek Adonis and Goddesses.

What a wonderful story!

Great characters, beautiful moral. Every much like your stuff!

Outstanding, loved every word of it! 5*

You have a well-written love story, just like the kind we have come to expect from your pen. I imagine sexy Larry with a slightly haired muscular chest pressing his hairy chest and abs against her breast, and giving her night after night of pleasure. They are happy together because of love, and he has treated her lovingly and kindly. Great story!

I want to congratulate you!! This is entertaining reading with enough sexual activity to get any normal persons libido going!! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!!