All Comments on 'Estranged and then Coming Together'

your start sounded good you must write more

Mistakes everywhere and the interrupt the story flow.

Mistakes in the comment below interrupted my flow of reading it.

I liked the story; however, it needs more plot and character development. Why were he and his sister isolated? Why did his mother have esteem problems? Why did is mother not like his wife? Why did she not visit her son except for the birth of her grandson? Why is the sister still living with the mother since she is 18 months older than the son? This story could go into multiple chapters because there are so many subplots present that need to be developed. The author can write; he/she only needs to.

Just not much to it just a hi mom and then the sex just a 3

It was okay but it felt more like rape then incest and then you stopped and left us hanging gave it a 3

Not much of a story.

Wow, musta made the author cry and give up on the story.