All Comments on 'Estranged Relations'

I enjoyed reading this story. And the characters were actually intelligent not uneducated ignorant teen agers. Good job.

Well done.

Who is Emily?

@vanye sorry I messed up that one line. That's what happens when you work on multiple stories at once.

I really feel like you rushed through this one too quickly. Some of the descriptions about their mutual attraction seems rather bland. I only gave you a 4 because there was a better story about these two that could have easily been told. I would have given you a three, but you earned a bonus point for having their home be in Houston.