All Comments on 'Eternal, Ethereal Experience'

Wow. Very unique. I liked it.

Absolutely not what I expected. Brilliant.

That would have HURT, right?

Now that emerged from a wonderfully overactive imagination.

Wildly imaginative!!

Well, that's different! A lot of imagination packed into a limited space. I liked the surrealism.

You’d think angels would be nicer. Definitely different!

Gives a whole new dimension to "Passing a stone...". lol. This will make a good partial outline should you decide to write the rest of this story. Interesting concept. Looking forward to your next post. Thanks for sharing.

You have an AMAZING imagination! Another beautifully written tale! Another five stars from me!!

This one felt extremely original, and dare I say, thought-provoking! Not a big fan of Kate though, I have to say. Hehe. But I am impressed that you managed to create such a complex relationship between Kate and Elisa in just 750 words. Also, flawless title! Easy 5/5.

This was a beautiful piece. Very vivid in imagery and such a wild conclusion!

I love the way you broke it up into vignettes that each work to tell the overall story. Everything dark is between the lines, but the story is told in such a way that you know what doesn't need to be said. Well done!