by mejau71
Absolutely love your story. One of my favorites. Can't wait to
read the final chapter.
Very good indeed! Well written and one hell of an imagination! I would hope you continue this and let us see where they go together! Thank you!
Another bit of awesomeness. Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep it up!
Wow this is without doubt one of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you
YOU MY DEAR ARE A VERY ARTICULATE WRITER. I LOVE YOUR WHIT AND HOW YOU ARE SO EPIGRAMMATIC IN YOUR DESCRIPTIONS. I MISS BEING POSTED A SCRIPT OR TEXT TO EDIT OR PROOFREAD KNOWING I BEING THE FIRST TO READ THE WORDS AND HOPING TO BE FLOORED AND AWED AT HOW WELL IT WAS WRITTEN LIKE I WAS A BYSTANDER, A CHARACTER IN THE SCENE, THINKING OF HOW I MIGHT BE WORDING EACH PARAGRAPH MYSELF.
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! THIS BEING ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOW!!!
THANK YOU.
I love how you combine romance and sexy heat between Chris and Beth. Very descriptive writing. Evokes emotions in the reader -- not something every writer can do. Looking forward to more stories like this!
this is a really fantastic, sexy, well-written story. Chris is a pretty lucky guy.
This is a well written, logically developed incestuous love story between a mother and son. The major characters had well developed personalities with depth and breadth. I consider this series to be erotic literature. I believe it accurately reflects how a real world incestuous would develop and how the relationship would sustain itself. 5-star series without question.
Still a Beautiful story!!
I didn't think i would like Shannon being so personally and closely involved with Beth's and Christopher's union. I'm glad i was WRong. Because of Shannon's personal history, i think she has earned a place in mother's and son's life if they are all 3 in agreement. The author continues with a beautiful, sweet, loving (as well as Hot) tale. Some commenters have said this chapter isn't as good as 1 & 2. Maybe the Newness has worn off for some. But Opinions vary. I never mentioned this in my comments for 1 & 2 but mejau71's writing style has the dialogue between the characters just as i would imagine hearing their conversation as if i am Eavesdropping. The emotions; the surprises; the thoughts; the confessions are conveyed in a way that make it so much more real, special and captivating. I, for one, really appreciate that effort Very much. Maybe it takes a romantic to see it that way. 5🌟