by mejau71
Still a Beautiful story!!
I didn't think i would like Shannon being so personally and closely involved with Beth's and Christopher's union. I'm glad i was WRong. Because of Shannon's personal history, i think she has earned a place in mother's and son's life if they are all 3 in agreement. The author continues with a beautiful, sweet, loving (as well as Hot) tale. Some commenters have said this chapter isn't as good as 1 & 2. Maybe the Newness has worn off for some. But Opinions vary. I never mentioned this in my comments for 1 & 2 but mejau71's writing style has the dialogue between the characters just as i would imagine hearing their conversation as if i am Eavesdropping. The emotions; the surprises; the thoughts; the confessions are conveyed in a way that make it so much more real, special and captivating. I, for one, really appreciate that effort Very much. Maybe it takes a romantic to see it that way. 5🌟
This is a well written, logically developed incestuous love story between a mother and son. The major characters had well developed personalities with depth and breadth. I consider this series to be erotic literature. I believe it accurately reflects how a real world incestuous would develop and how the relationship would sustain itself. 5-star series without question.
this is a really fantastic, sexy, well-written story. Chris is a pretty lucky guy.
I love how you combine romance and sexy heat between Chris and Beth. Very descriptive writing. Evokes emotions in the reader -- not something every writer can do. Looking forward to more stories like this!
YOU MY DEAR ARE A VERY ARTICULATE WRITER. I LOVE YOUR WHIT AND HOW YOU ARE SO EPIGRAMMATIC IN YOUR DESCRIPTIONS. I MISS BEING POSTED A SCRIPT OR TEXT TO EDIT OR PROOFREAD KNOWING I BEING THE FIRST TO READ THE WORDS AND HOPING TO BE FLOORED AND AWED AT HOW WELL IT WAS WRITTEN LIKE I WAS A BYSTANDER, A CHARACTER IN THE SCENE, THINKING OF HOW I MIGHT BE WORDING EACH PARAGRAPH MYSELF.
I LOVE YOUR STORIES! THIS BEING ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOW!!!
THANK YOU.
Wow this is without doubt one of the best stories I have ever read. Thank you
Another bit of awesomeness. Can't wait until the next chapter. Keep it up!
Very good indeed! Well written and one hell of an imagination! I would hope you continue this and let us see where they go together! Thank you!
Absolutely love your story. One of my favorites. Can't wait to
read the final chapter.