by SuperWriter
So, an obviously retarded 18 yr old brother fucks his 23 yr old sister... and deliberately gets her pregnant. Errr... she is no longer working, has no income and neither does he. How exactly does he expect to support her and himself? The story doesn't explain how he currently supports himself and goes to College. (Or is it still High School?) What a fucken loser. She's also a coke addict... Incest is the least of his problems now. He can't marry her. She'll have a bastard and go back to drugs and move on from stripping to hooking. Why didn't she have an abortion? Don't tell me it's against her morals: she's a stripper, whore druggie who fucks her childish, teenage unemployed student brother. What morals?
It is obvious that you do not realize that some stories are "fiction" and or based on fantasy. If you don't like the story based on its story line, tham don't read it. It is ridiculously immature of you to come into the comments and show your butt hurt childish feelings. Grow up and fuck off!
Super writer great story, hope to see more!
Waiting for a woman to get high and then fucking her in a way she didn't agree to is rape. Update your tags.
And, on a personal note, if you think this qualifies as romance, see u fuckin' shrink, dude.
I’ll be honest, this isn’t perfect. But i think that’s why i like it. Too many stories here follow the same path, this is different. I’m OK with the sister being kind of a bum at the moment, and the brother being a little.. dimwitted? It leaves room for character development. I’m interested to see what’s to come if you write more. Good work overall.
I am interested in the rest i wish the whole pregnancy would be retconned, I like this story and would like you to write more of this.
The story started out well, but got weird on the second page. It would have been cool if she had "finished" the lap dance at the apartment, or even just the blowjob. The whole nonconsentual pregnancy thing was super awkward, though.
I was expecting a "separated at a young age and grown up apart, only to find out after it was too late" type of scenario, not knowing she was his sister right off the bat.
Hated it that his sister was a drug addict. Loved the fact that he wanted her to get clean. But I hated the way that he manipulated her still and all. 3/5
Unfinished story and a drug addiction sister that is high and doesn’t remember what happens,, and what about the baby being an addict
2⭐️ story for me
So a rapist brother with pure intentions, and a drug-addicted stripper sister. Noice, I'm sure their kid's gonna be raised real well