All Comments on 'Eva Pt. 09'

Outstanding work! I wish I were more eloquent, more verbose...I draw a blank when I'm pleased with an author's work...big, blank canvas of pure happiness that this story is so well written. This series is always the first I read when you release new installments. Thumbs up, 5 stars, a humongous round of applause. You wrote the brokenness of the father well, and heartfelt. My father came very close to the collapse portrayed here, and the anger, hurt, and betrayal felt by the son and daughter was spot-on. Well done....

Wonderful chapter!

5

The best chapter yet in this great story

This is such a believable tale...Thanks...and please continue to share your talent with us.

I know how ones personal story can affect what one puts on paper ( sic. ) but the way you handle particularly emotive subjects like the family breakdown and the disposal of the family home is so true and honest the reader becomes part of it rather than an onlooker, brilliant writing with one proviso, at times there is just too much sex too graphic but on the whole, well done. Looking forward to the next part.

Another great chapter thanks for sharing.

Cheers

SAGE

Another great chapter. Strong emotions both good and bad handled extremely well.

Wow, father of the year there. You have me guessing! Can’t wait to solve the mystery.

Neckless- without a neck

Necklace- jewelry worn around the neck