All Comments on 'Eva Pt. 11'

My goodness your stories just keep getting better and better! They are so real like the rollercoaster of real life. You have the rare talent and skill of a true story teller. Love your work with the small intimate details that glues the story together and forces the reader to become immersed in the story line. Well done indeed, Sir, well done indeed!

No pressure but looking for the next episode to show up in my follow list....Soon!

Stay healthy, stay happy and keep writing!

Cheers

SAGE

Another great chapter. Your strength in bringing emotions through words is outstanding.

A wonderful chapter! Great characters.

5

In this chapter you stated that Adrienne didn’t attend Jon’s mother’s funeral and that they hadn’t talked since before then. In chapter 8 Adrienne did attend the funeral. In fact, Adrienne, Jon & Eva went down to the basement to talk.