by Rabbitman55
Awesome storytelling, excellent continuity throughout and riveting in great areas!
A cliffhanger...whoa! I am "on pins and needles" until the next chapter.
A cliffhanger...whoa!!! You have me "on pins and needles" until the next chapter. Well done!!!
next chapter please don't take away from the story by not writing the conclusion thank you very well written i think
Ramping up the tension again ! Glad I don't have to wait for the follow up.