by kuroukiphoenyx
SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY HOPE YOU COME WITH CH. 3
I enjoyed the follow up...I know she still harbors some fears, moving forward, but he is soo...patient and a kind lover for her...will the ex she moved away from make an reaccurance in the next story? Is Mitch as perfect as he seems-the door was left open about him having other choices (will their presence be known?)...Is this really love or infactuation for the moment? My mind is a whirlwind of questions...what happens when she totally gives herself to him-will his ex make an appearance?
The possibilities are endless for the direction...I am curious enough to keep in tuned for more. Please continue on...
It seems very real and that makes it very powerful. Yes sometimes these fantasy stories where everyone is perfect can be entertaining and a fun read. But the truth and honesty and realness of this also makes it so beautiful. Thank you for writing this and continue please.
This is very real and I would love to find out how this progresses.
I am at present working on chapter 3. This is kind of turning into a mini testinonial and is going deeper into my memories...it will take me a bit but ill be ready.
I am happy that she got out when she did. Sometimes incorporating real life with fantasy makes a story better. It can also release a lot of stress. Thanks for ur story.
I tend to favor stories that are not so shallow. You've done a great job of revealing the inner workings of your characters - better with this chapter than the last.
Clearly a very personal topic as well. I admire your fortitude in sharing this with your readers.
LIfe happened, changing of jobs happened, and stuff.....happened.
However, i have submitted the third part to this story and hope that you guys will enjoy,
I.E.... Don't post at three am after working over 10 hours....groan....
OYASUMI NASAI.
Jade is so broken, I hope that Mitch helps her to see that she is worthy of love and acceptance. This is a great story!!