All Comments on 'Even Steven'

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KittyLover80KittyLover80over 1 year ago

Outstanding story with wonderful characters. Loved the plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a lovely romance story with excellent characters. It should have been much longer, and certainly warrants at least two sequels. Five stars.

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Good suck

And fuck story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I love this story's artwork on your web page.

Story was hot too! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very hot

This was great. I especially enjoyed How you were able to describe the sensations the characters were feeling. I could actually feel it myself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great writing

Wow! Your writing is so smooth and polished. I love your reality.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great realistic..

fucking story. Keep it up and firing.

karen90karen90almost 13 years ago
Excellent!

Except for the cum shot, it was extremely hot! It's one of the best I've come across. The build up and anticipation, especially during the eating out scenes, is amazing. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Fab.

What excitement and fulfilment, great.

TXanyTXanyabout 13 years ago
You better not stop!

Great story, but really it is a great start to a longer one too. Lots of characters with lots of hiddent kinks and desires. Please continue...who knows, the redhead and Andrea could end up with Kyle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Hot

Hot story. We came out ahead too.

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I reject your reality, and substitute my own. My stories are not meant for those who seek complete reality, which I assume my pen name should give away. In my little world, there are no STDs, unless necessary to the story. The weird exception is the rule when you step into ...