All Comments on 'Evening in Italy'

Second person stories are an automatic ratings of 1.

No. There is a reason why second-person writing is never found outside of amateur writing. Second-person reading is tedious, cold, and flat, and combined with this format, it's too much work to read. Experimental writing is fine, but it's not to everyone's liking.

That is the most erotic story i have read here.

There are some missing words and other errors which call for better editing, but otherwise a well written tale.

Not my cuppa tea.

Barare puttana cornuti dali’Italia in questo pezzo di merda.